大学英语四级词汇表
想知道大学英语四级词汇表draw a conclusion 得出结论 draw away 拉开；引开；离开 draw aside 拉到一边 draw back 收回(已付关税等) draw in (火车、汽车)进站 draw into 使卷入 draw lots 抽签，抽签决定 draw on 吸收；利用；凭；戴上 draw out 拉长；掏出(手帕等) draw to a close 结束；终结 draw up 起草，制订 dream of 梦到；梦想；向往
dream up (凭想象)虚构 dress up 穿上盛装 be in drink 喝醉了 be on the drink 常常喝酒，酗酒 drink down 以酒消(愁) drink to 为…干杯，为…祝福 drink up 喝干净，喝完 drive at 意指 drive away at 努力做(工作等) drive home 用车把…送到家 drive out 赶出去 drive up 抬高 drop by 顺便走访，非正式访问 drop off 睡着；(让…)下车
drop on 训斥，惩罚 drop out 退出，退学；掉落 drop over 顺便来访 dry up (使)干涸 due to 由于；应归于 in due course 在适当的时候 do duty for 当…用，起作用 do ones duty 尽职，尽本分 off duty 下班 on duty 值班；上班 dwell on 细想；详细讲述 each other[i:t6 352]互相(多用作宾语)be all ears 全神贯注地倾听着
give ear to 听，倾听 give ones ears 不惜任何代价(要) early or late 迟早 keep early hours 早睡早起 earn ones living 谋生 on earth 在世界上；究竟，到底 at ease 自由自在；舒适，舒坦 take it easy 不紧张；放松；松懈 eat of 吃…中的一部分 eat off 吃掉，腐烂掉 eat up 吃完，吃光；耗尽 bring into effect 实行，实现，实施
come into effect 开始生效，开始实行 in effect 实际上；正实行中 take effect (等)见效 either...or 或…或，不是…就是 or else 否则，要不然 employ oneself in 使忙于，使从事于 be out of employment 失业 empty of 缺乏，无 be at the end 到尽头，达限度 come to an end 告终，结束；完结 end in 以…为结果 end off 结束
end up 结束，告终；竖着 end up with 以…而结束 in the end 最后，终于 on end 连续地；竖着 to the end of time 永远 world without end 永远，永久地 engaged in 使从事于，使忙于 engaged with 与…有事商谈 enjoy oneself[ind-0i w3nself]过得快活；玩得高兴 ensure sb. against 保护某人免受… enter into 进入；参加；开始从事
enter upon 开始，着手 be equal to 等于，相当于 equip with 装备，配备 by error 错误地 in error 弄错了的；错误地 even if 即使，纵然 at all events 无论如何 even now 即使在现在 in any event 不管怎样，无论如何 in the event of 如果…发生，万一 for ever 永远 for example 例如 except for 除…之外 go to excess 走极端
in excess of 超过 in exchange for 交换 exert oneself to 努力，尽力 expect of 对…期望(要求) at the expense of 归…付费 go to the expense of 为…的目的花钱 find expression in 在…中表现出来 give expression to 表达出，反映 to some extent 在某种程度上 catch sb.s eye 引起(某人)注目 [page]clap eyes on 看见；注视
keep an eye on 照看；留意 keep ones eyes open 留心看着；保持警惕 run ones eyes over 扫视，浏览 see eye to eye 看法完全一致 face to face 面对面(的)地；对立地 face up to 勇敢地对付；大胆面向 in face of 面对；纵然，即使 make a face (表示厌恶等)做鬼脸 as a matter of fact 事实上，其实 in fact 其实，实际上
in point of 实际上，就事实而论
大学英语四级词汇表
fail in 在…不足，疏忽 fail to 不能，记忆 without fail 必定，务必 in faith 确实，的确 keep faith 守信，忠于信仰 break faith 背信，背弃信仰 fall back on 求助于，转而依靠 fall behind 落在…后面，跟不上 fall for 爱上，迷恋；受骗 fall in love 爱上某人fall in with 偶尔遇到；同意，赞许 fall into 落入；陷于；河流注入 fall out 争吵；闹翻；结果 fall out of 放弃(习惯等) fall through 失败，成为泡影 fall to 着手；开始攻击 fall under 受到(影响等)；被列为 a far cry 遥远的距离 as far as …那么远，直到；至于 far and away 大大…；无疑地 far and near 远近，到处，四面八方
far from 远离，决不，完全不 in so far as (程度等)就…；至于 so far 迄今为止 be in fashion (人、物)合于时尚 do sb. a four 给某人以恩惠 in four of 赞成，支持；有利于 out of four 失宠；不受欢迎 fear for 为…担心 for fear of 由于害怕；生怕，以免 feed on 以…为食物(能源) feed up 供给…营养 feed with 加上(油、煤等)
be fed up 吃得过饱；对…极厌倦 feel like 感到想要做 feel out 试探出，摸清 feel up to 觉得能担当 a few 少许，一些 a good few 相当多，不少 no fewer than 不少于 quite a few 相当多，有相当数目 figure on 把…估计在内；指望 figure out 计算出；估计；理解 figure up 计算…，把…总加起来 fill in 填充，填写，临时代替
fill out 填好，填写；使长大 fill up 填补；装满 find oneself 发觉自己的处境 find out 查明；找到；发现 finish up 结束；完成 finish up with 以…结束；最后有… finish with 完成，结束 catch fire 着火，烧着 fire up (突然)生气，勃然大怒 on fire 起火；(喻)非常激动 set fire to 使燃烧，点燃 at first 最初，首先，开始时候
first and foremost 首要地，首先 first of all 首先，第一 first or last (古)迟早，早晚 fish out 捞出；把…中的鱼捕尽 fix ones eyes on 注意，注视 fix up 修补，修理好；解决 flame out 突然冒火焰 flare up 突然烧起来；突然发怒 flash out 突然说，突然表现出来 fly into a temper 大发脾气，勃然大怒 focus...on 使眼睛注视，集中
in focus 焦点对准；清晰 out of focus 焦点没有对准；模糊 as follows 如下 follow out 贯彻；把…探究到底 follow through 坚持到底 follow up 穷追(猎物等) be fond of 爱好 on foot 步行；在进行中 by force 凭借暴力；强迫地 in force (法律)有效的；大批地 put...in force 实施…；使…生效 forget about 忘记 and so forth 等等
free and easy 不拘形式的；随便的 [page]free from 不受…影响的 free of 无…的；摆脱了…的 set free 释放，使获得自由 freeze up (使)冻结 be friends with 与…交友(友好) keep friends with 与…保持友好 make friends with 与…交朋友 in front of 在…前面，面对 be full of 充满 in full 充足，十足 to the full 完全地；彻底地
in full swing 活跃；正在全力进行 make fun of 取笑，嘲笑 for the future 从今以后，在今后 in future 今后，以后 in the future 将来 gain on 跑得比…快；逼近 generation gap 代沟 in general 通常，一般地说 get about 走动；旅行 get above oneself 变得自高自大 get across 使通过，使被理解 get along 过活；相处融洽；进展
get along with 与…友好相处；有进展 get around 规避(法律等)；走动 get at 到达；了解；查明 get away 逃脱；离开；出发 get by 通过；走过，侥幸躲过 get down 从…下来；下车；写下
大学英语四级词汇表
get down to 开始认真考虑或对待 get in 收获；收(税等)；抵达 get into 对…发生兴趣；卷入 get into the act 插手…以便得到好处 get off 下车；离开；开始 get on 骑上(马等)；过活 get on to 知道；意识到 get on with 与…友好相处；继续干 get ones hands on 得到，找到；占有get out 离去；(消息等)泄漏 get out of 逃避；摆脱；改掉 get over 克服(困难等) get the better of 占上风；克服；抑制 get through 到达；完成；接通电话 get together 聚集；会面；装配 get up[get 3p]起床；爬上；达到 give away 泄露(秘密等)；增送 give back 归还；恢复；后退 give birth 使诞生；生(孩子) give in 投降；交上去；听任
give off 发出或放出(蒸气等) give out 分发；发出(气味等) give rise to 产生；引起 give up 放弃；投降；抛弃 give way to 让位于；给…让路 go about 从事，着手做；闲逛 go after 追逐，追求；设法得到 go ahead 前进，领先；取得进展 go all out 全力以赶；鼓足干劲 go along with 赞同；附合，支持 go around (消息)流传；足够分配
go back on 违背，毁(约) go by 走过，放过；依照 go down 下去；(船等)下沉 go for 为…去；努力获取 go in for 从事于；酷爱；追求 go into 进入；投入；调查 go into action 开始行动 go off 离去；去世；被发射 go off with 拿去；抢走；拐走 go on 继续下去，进行；接近 go out 走出(房间等)；罢工 go out of ones way 特别费心(做事)
go over 检查；从头至尾温习 go through 经历；完成；检查 go together 相配；恋爱 go up 上升；(物价等)上涨 go with 与…持同一看法；伴随 go without 不享受 as good as 和…几乎一样 be good at 善于，擅长于 for good 永久地；一劳永逸地 good for 有效的；值…；胜任 grasp at 向…抓去，想抓住 on the grounds of 以…为理由；根据
grow on (习惯)加深对…的影响 grow up 成熟；成年；逐渐形成 guarantee against 保证…不… on guard 站岗，值班 on ones guard 警惕，警戒；提防 be in the habit of 有…习惯(或脾气) do ones hair (女子)做头发 do up ones hair (女子)梳理头发 lose ones hair 脱发；发脾气 [page]in half 成两半 at hand 在手边；在附近
by hand 用手；用手工的 in hand 现有在手头；在进行中 on hand 现有；在手边；临近 hand down 把…传下来；传给 hand in 交上；递上，交进 hand in hand 手拉手；联合 hand on 传下来，依次传递 hand out 分派；把…拿出来 hand over 交出，移交；让与 shake hands with 与…握手 take a hand in 参加；帮助 hang about 闲荡；聚在…临近
hang on 抓紧不放；坚持下去 hang on to 紧紧握住 hang up 把…挂起来；挂断 happen to 碰巧 happen on 巧遇；偶然发现 be hard on sb. 过于严厉对待某人 be hard up 短缺，在急需中 go hard with sb. 使某人为难(或痛苦) hardly any 几乎没有 hardly...when... 刚…就… he a ball 玩得高兴 he a good time 过得快乐，玩得高兴
he back 要回，收回 he no business 没有权力或理由做某事 he on 穿着；有事；进行 he to 不得不；必须 he to do with 与…有关；和…打交道 head for 朝…方向走去 head on 迎面地，正面地 head up 在…上加盖子 keep ones head 保持镇静 lose ones head 慌乱；被砍头 in good health 身体好 hear of 听到，听说 hear from 接到…的信
at heart 在内心里；实质上 by heart 熟记，牢记，凭记忆 heart and soul 全心全意地，完全地 heart to heart 坦率地 learn by heart 记住，背诵 lose heart 丧失勇气(或信心) lose ones heart to 心被…俘去，爱上 in the heat of 在(辩论)最激烈的时候
大学英语四级词汇表
at sb.s heels 紧跟在某人的后面 take to ones heels 逃走，逃之夭夭 under the heel of 在…统治下，被…践踏 can not help 情不自禁，忍不住 help oneself 自取所需(食物等) help sb. out 帮助，帮忙 help sb. with sth. 在…帮助某人 with the help of 在…的帮助下here and now 此时此地 here and there 到处，各处；偶然 get hold of 一把抓住；掌握；得到 hold...against 记恨 hold back 踌躇，退缩不前，阻止 hold down 压制；抑制(热情等) hold in 约束，抑制 hold office 担任公职 hold on 握住不放；坚持下去 hold on to 紧紧抓住；控制，克制 hold oneself in 尽力不叫 hold ones own 坚守住，不被打败
hold out 伸出；坚持；支持 hold up 举起；耽搁；抢劫 hold water (容器等)盛得住水 lay hold of 握住；控制住；占有 at home 在家，在国内；自在 in ones honour 向…表示敬意 keep house 管理家务；做家务 how about?
…如何？…怎么样？ hurry up[h3ri 3p](使)赶快；迅速完成 in a hurry 匆忙；立即，很快地 break the ice 打破沉默
identify with 认为…等同于 if only 只要；要是…就好 be ignorant of 对…不知道(了解) attach importance to 重视 of importance 重要，具有重要意义 improve on 对…作出改进；超过 be in for 参加(竞赛、考试等) in and out 进进出出 be inferior to (质量等)比…差 inquire about 询问，打听 inquire after 问起(某人)的健康情况
inquire for 询问(商店、地点等) for instance 例如，比如，举例说 instead of 代替；而不是… by instinct 凭(靠)本能 [page]in the interest of 为了…的利益，为了 take interest in 对…感(产生)兴趣 interfere in 干涉，干预 interfere with 打扰(某人)，妨碍 at intervals 不时；相隔一定的距离 at regular intervals 每隔一定时间(距离)
as it is 事实上，既然如此 as it were 似乎，可以说是 by itself 自动地；单独地 in itself 本质上，就其本身而言 of itself 自行(到来) jet lag 时差反应 do a good job 好好干；干得好 join hands with 互相合作，携起手来 join in 参加(活动) join up 参军，入伍；联合起来 play a joke on sb. 开某人的玩笑 judging by 从…判断
jump at 急忙接受，立即抓住 jump off 开始，开始进攻 just about 差不多，几乎 just as 正象；正当…的时候 just the same 完全一样 do justice 公平对待；和…酷似 be keen about 喜爱，对…着迷 be keen on 喜爱；渴望 keep away 站开；使离开 keep back 留在后面；阻止；隐瞒 keep company with 和…交往 keep down 控制；压服；缩减开支
keep from 阻止；使免于；隐瞒 keep in mind 记住 keep off 避开；不让…接近 keep on 继续进行，反复地做 keep out of 躲开，(使)置身…之外 keep to 坚持；固守(习惯等) keep to oneself 保守秘密，不与人来往 keep under 压制；控制 keep up 继续；坚持，维持 keep up with 跟上，不落后 kill off 消灭，杀光 kind of (状语)有点儿，有几分
bend ones knee to 向…跪下，屈服于 drop to ones knees 跪下 fall on ones knees 跪下(请求等) knock down 撞倒；击落；拆除 knock off 把…敲掉；击倒；停工 knock out 敲空；(拳击中)击倒 know about 了解，知道…的情况 know better than 很懂得(而不至于) be known as 以…知名；被认为是 be known for 因…而众所周知
be known to 为…所知 labour along 缓慢而费力地前进 for lack of 因缺乏；因没有 he no lack of 不缺乏 at large 完全地；详尽地 at last 最终，终于 at the latest 最迟，至迟 early and late 从早到晚 no later than 不迟于… laugh at 因…而发笑；嘲笑
大学英语四级词汇表
2018年6月英语四级真题
精选的2018年6月英语四级真题沪江英语 2016-11-08 11:15
这次四级在听力上的改革,删除了所有同学做惯的老题型——短对话和听写,增加了大家相对陌生的新闻听力（四级）.所有的题,将都以选择题的形式出现.并且首次出现了分值为2分的听力题.难度上有了大幅度的提高.四级听力试题的调整
1. 取消短对话
2. 取消短文听写
3. 新增短篇新闻（3段）其余测试内容不变.调整后四级听力部分的试题结构见下表:
改革之处: 短篇新闻,原是英语专业四级与八级的题型,在改革去除之后,跑到了四级当中. 此次,四级中,会有3段新闻,7道选择题.两篇较短的新闻,字数在130-140词左右；较长的一篇,字数在200词左右. 沪江考试院教研老师发现,在四六级考试委员会此次所给出的样题中,三段新闻皆出自于bbc news.难点所在:
新闻听力中,会出现大量的专有名词与正式用语.同时,话题也将不再是大家熟悉的校园,生活类,而将转变为时事政治与社会热点.这对于原本听力基础就较为薄弱的同学而言,就更是雪上加霜.应对方法:
1. 词汇积累:背诵英语新闻中的高频与专业词汇.（可使用开心词场,背诵新闻词汇.）
2. 掌握新闻规律:新闻作为正式文章,在结构方面是相对固定的.按照总分结构展开,首句说明事情概况,之后进行细节描述.同时,出题也会从总体和细节两个方面进行.掌握好规律,提高做题的正确率.
3. 着手练习: 由于原本在英语专业考试中有涉及,因此同学们可以先从以前的专业四级考试中选择题目进行练习,熟悉题型. 平时,开始收听bbc与voa的新闻,养成每日浏览外媒新闻的习惯,加强对于时事热点的了解.
4.名师解析: 四六级改革,同学们也不要太焦虑,大家可以多关注四六级老师的深度剖析,具体请关注,有问题也可以第一时间交流哦！
大学英语四级作文范文
想知道大学英语四级作文范文 作文题目： “Women in the Modern World” 提纲：
1. Women are playing an increasingly important part in society today.____________
2. With the changes in their social role, women’s position in the family has been improved as well. ___________________
3. In spite of these changes, the liberation of women has not been completely realized.
___________________________ 例1． （2分段） Women are playing an increasingly important part in society today. Long age, women only did something in the kitchen or at home. Now many of them he serious jobs to serve for people. What men can do so can women. With the changes in their social role, women’s position in the family has been improved as well. Today in the family, the wife often lots her husband to do something at home bat ago, only women did something. Men are foned of doing something at home.
In spite of these changes, the liberation of women has not been completely realized. Sometimes, the matter, the husband hitting has welf, often happened. In the factory the wonmen to as much as the men, but they are paid less than the men. Some people he not completely realized the liberation of women.
东方教育点评：条理不清，思路紊乱，大部分句子均有错误，有的甚至影响理解。 具体问题剖析：
(1)缺乏逻辑，东一句西一句，没有围绕中心论述，如第一段就没有展开论述妇女社会角色的转变，说得太笼统而缺乏说服力。
（2）用汉语思维，句子有明显的汉语痕迹，如“What men can do so can women.”，应改为“Women can do what men can do”。
（3）衔接不自然，没有用适当的关联词，如“Sometimes, the matter, the husband hitting has welf, often happened”，应改为“The case that husband hits his wife often happens. ”
（4）拼写错误很多，大部分句子均有错误。 例2．（5分段 ） Women are playing an increasingly important part in society today. In today, many women he a work. They worked as well as men playing an important part in factories. There are many women in government also. They lead other people country, and make out plans. There are many scientist slso. They event new things to improve our life.
With the changes in their social role, women’s position in the family has been improved as well. In ancient, women’s position in family is pity. They had to looks after their children, did every how husband ordered her to do. But now it is changed. They are equal to her husband. They he the right of speaking of idea, discussion thing with her husband, do what she wants to do.
In spite of these changes, the liberation of women has not been completely realized. We also should realize, women’ likerty are limited. For example, many factories want men become its workers but the chance of women is less than men. Everyone should do their best to change this condition. I’m sure, the liberation of women would be increased.
东方教育点评：基本切题。但表达思想不清楚，连贯性差。有较多的严重语言错误。 具体问题剖析：
（1）各段围绕中心句论述不深入，没有说服力。
（2）衔接不自然，没有用适当的关联词，如第一段几个句子之间可以用一些“besides”、“on the other hand”、“furthermore”、“in addition”等。
（3）语言错误较多，很多句子不通顺，如“In today, many women he a work.”应改为“Today, many women get a job.”(滥用介词)；“In ancient, women’s position in family is pity”中pity应改为pitiful（词形误用）；“They had to looks after their children, did every how husband ordered her to do.”中every 改为everything，how改为what（代词错误）；“They he the right of speaking of idea, discussion thing with her husband, do what she wants to do.”应改为“They he the right to express ideas, discuss things with their respective husband, and do what they want to.”(人称代词前后不一致)。
例3．（8分段） Women are playing an increasingly important part in society today. Many Women today are playing an important part at works that was thought only could be done by the men before. For an example. Some women are not secrtary in the office, instead, they become manager of a company. With the changes in their social role, women’s position in the family has been improved as well. In the world today, more and more women he their own job. They get their own salary, and become more independent from their husband. With the economic situation improved, their family position is improving.
In spite of these changes, the liberation of women has not been completely realized. Many husbands only want his wife to stay at home, and do house works or do some shopping. They only want their wife to be a housewife, but not a manager of a company. 东方教育点评：基本切题。有些地方表达思想不够清楚，文字勉强连贯；语言错误相当多，其中有一些是严重错误。
具体问题剖析：
（1）论证不够深入，缺少事例，缺少说服力。
（2）文字缺连贯、且显累赘，如第二段可以把各句再改得简练一点并且有适当的转承词。
（3）语言错误相当多，如“For an example”，“Some women are not secrtary in the office, instead, they become manager of a company.”应改为“Some women are on longer secretaries in the office, instead, they become managers of the companies.”（单复数）
例4．（11分段） Women are playing an increasingly important part in society today. More and more women go to work to earn money instead of keeping the house or looking after the children. Women he entered many fields of society including scientific field. As we know, many women sports teams he won the world’s champions such as Chinese women’s Volleyball Team.
With the changes in their social role, women’s position in the family has been improved as well. Husbands are not the masters of wives in many places. Husbands and wives are equal now. They join together to overcome difficulties and share happiness. In spite of these changes, the liberation of women has not been completely realized. Also in some places. Women are considered being “thing” belong to men. They he little chance to find jobs. They don’t get equal pay for equal job. This is a problem must be solved not only by society but also by women themselves.
东方教育点评：切题。表达思想清楚，文字连贯，用词比较准确，但有少量语言错误，如“Also in some places. Women are considered being “thing” belong to men”，应改为“Also in some places，women are considered being the “things”that belong to men” 例5．（14分段） Women are playing an increasingly important part in society today. In Many countries, more and more women are acting as workers, farmers, scientists and even leaders. We can say that almost all jobs which men can do are done perfectly by women. Women are no longer looked down upon by society.
With the changes in their social role, women’s position in the family has been improved as well. Husband and wife are now equal in the family. They cope with problems of daily life together, and share happiness with each ther. Also, you can hardly find out that in today’s families, women are being busy with dinners, whereas men comfortably sitting in armchairs, reading newspapers.
In spite of these changes, the liberation of women has not been completely realized. In spite of these changes, the liberation of women has not been completely realized. A number of men still jealously guard their rights, and regard women as incapable creature. Few women are allowed to attend important international meetings dominated by men. That’s really the problems we should solve immediately.
东方教育点评：切题。论证充分，有说服力，论证手段丰富（举例、正反）表达思想清楚，语言流畅，词汇丰富，连贯性好。用词准确，仅有个别小错误。 p.s. 由于一些例文错误较多，点评中只是列举了部分的典型错误，而且为了保持原文面貌，编辑没有做过多的改动，所以欢迎大家一起来挑错，有问题和小水一起讨论。
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2003年9月考试四级作文题：The Day My Classmate Fell Ill (or Got Injured) 提纲：1.简单叙述一下这位同病（或受伤）的情况
2.同学、老师和我是如何帮助他/她的
3.人与人之间的这种相互关爱给我的感受是…… 例1． （2分段） One day, we are all in classroom. Wang fang said, Oh! We all see her and found that she was crying! Teacher turned to ask her what was wrong. She said, I do got a fever, my head is very hot! Feng Gang sent she to hospital, we all followed they. In the hospital, doctor Wang give a inject to her, she gradually calm and not hot as before. We all thanked the doctor.
东方教育点评：未能按照题目要求写，没有着重写同学、老师和我是如何帮助他/她的 人与人之间的这种相互关爱给我的感受是……。条理不清，思路紊乱，大部分句子均有错误，有的甚至影响理解。 原文修改后： One day, when we were all in classroom., Wang fang Suddenly cried,, Oh! We all looked at her and found that she was groaning. Teacher turned to ask her what was wrong. She said, I he got a fever, my head is very hot!
Immediately, our teacher sent her to hospital, and we all followed them. In the hospital, we asked doctor Wang to give an injection to her, and she gradually became calm and not as hot as before. We all thanked the doctor. The day has passed, but it is clearly in my mind. I think if we can do things like that in the incident, the society will be better, and the relationship between people will be better as well!
例2．（5分段） Last week, li ning and I studied in classroom. Suddenly, lining said to me that he had a headache .I asked he to see doctor. he said it was not bad. After 5 miniuts, lining sai to me his headache very serious. So I helped him go to hosptial Althought there was SARS around us, but I felt very rm from this thing. It told me that the love from true heart can help come across any difficult. We are so lucky that we live in a big warmth family. And not very long, my classmate was getting healthy and could come to school again. How happy we were!
东方教育点评：本文切题，表达思想清楚，文字比较连贯, 但有一些语法错误。 具体问题剖析：全文有一些语法、语言错误，如In 1 April 2003, one of my classmates was get serious cold.应改为In 1 April 2003,one of my classmates got serious cold.（时态）；First day when he came to school,应改为The first day when he came to school,（介词遗漏）；his sound was rough.应改为his voice was rough.（用词）；Althought there was SARS around us, I felt very warm from this thing.应把but去掉（连词）； It told me that the love from true heart can help come across any difficult.应改为It told me that the love from true heart could help come across any difficulties.（时态、词性错误）；We are so lucky that we live in a big warmth family.应改为We are so lucky that we live in a big warm family.（词性）。
例5．（14分段） During the SARS period in this spring, the year of 2003, one of my classmates, Li ming, was struck down by the virus and was immediately sent to hospital. The news spread quickly on campus. At first, we were terrified and wondered if we were infected too. However, through our governments publicity on mass media, we gradually conquered the fear and set out to try out best to help her. Some teachers provided darly necessities while some students recorded the English class contents for him so that Li ming could not be left behind. With our care and concern, Li ming recovered quickly.
Such an incident teaches us a good moral. Our society is full of love, warm and peaceful, in which people-from man to woman, from individual to individual-lend others a hand. Just like a famous song goes, the world will turn itto heen only if everyone contributes a little. and I do believe that its my great honor to live in this love-filled paradise!
东方教育点评：本文切题，论证丰富生动，表达思想清楚，文字通顺，连贯性较好。基本上无大的语言错误，仅有个别小错误。 p.s. 由于一些例文错误较多，点评中只是列举了部分的典型错误，而且为了保持原文面貌，编辑没有做过多的改动，所以欢迎大家一起来挑错，有问题和小水一起讨论。 2003年9月六级考试作文题： 图表作文，关于一个美国大学图书馆的图书流动量（pop fiction, general nonfiction, science, art等），给出他们的流动比例对比，说明原因，并说明你自己喜欢阅读什么样的书。
例1． （2分段） 此分段标准为条理不清，思路紊乱，大部分句子均有严重错误。 （为了不影响市容，给大家造成负面影响，故此处略去100字……） 例2．（5分段） From the novel, we can see that the students like read(reading) novel, at the same time, only (a) small part of students like read(reading) science and art.
The reason to(for) this is novel is intereting(interesting), students like reading it. Most of the students read too much(many) major books when they he classes, so they want to read some(something) interesting (when) they he time. Novel can let them relax(relaxed). So they choose novel. I like read(reading) novel, by reading it I know a lot of things, I also relax my brains. So I choose the novel.
东方教育点评：
(1)基本切题。
(2)表达思想不清楚，连贯性差。
(3)有较多的严重语言错误。
（4）字数不够，要酌情扣分。 例3．（8分段） We can know from the picture that most of students like reading popular novel instead of reading science, poetry. From this we can know different people he different addiction to(preferences for) books.
Different people he different addiction to(preferences for) books. They read different books just to meet their different needs. Because different people he different meets to read the different kinds of books. From this we can also see that different people he different intentions and notions. So they choose the different things to meet their needs in every facet in life.
I like reading poetry because I think poetry can make me calm, pleased, comfort(comforted), (and) I can see many beautiful thing(things) in the poetry. 东方教育点评：
(1)基本切题。
(2)第二段表达有点乱。
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（3）语言错误相当多，其中有一些是严重错误。 例4．（11分段） Book is the source of life. When we read a book, we should not only linger on the surface of a book, but also we should(删掉) master its intrinsic. As is charted in the blank, we can see clearly that a majority of the university students in America are addictet(addicted) to the popular fiction, and a minority of student like reading the science, poetry.
Why do they like reading popular novels?
In my opinion, popular novel books are usually interesting, earthly, close to our lives. In contrast, science, poetry books are usually serious, dull and difficult. Therefore, most of the students prefer the popular novels. I like reading the since book（science books）. For one thing, it can make me enhance my speciality knoweledy(specialized knowledge); In addition, it can help me know the frontier about my speciality and master the newest things in since(science); thirdly, it can give a good chance to know a lot and can help me to study the useful subject when I graduate from the university.
东方教育点评：
（1）本文基本切题，表达思想清楚。
（2）文字连贯，语言通顺。
（3）有一些语言错误。 例5．（14分段） It can be discerned that the American students prefer to read the popular novel rather than other kind of books, such as the nonpopular (unpopular) novel, the books of technology, poem and so on. The percentage of the popular novel current(currently) is about
68.2%. Other kind of novels current(currently) is, reletively (relatively), about
16.8%,
8.3%, and
5.2%.
It is not hard to think out why the popular novels can attract so many students. The popular novel is interesting, and not so abstract as books that full of the mathmatic formulate(mathematic formulae). However, as university students, study is the first task for us to do. So we should pay more attention to the books about our major. Fictions may color our life, but it can not be the key part of our studying life.
Personally, I would like to spend my free time in reading books about my major, such as technology digests, computer newspaper... Because I want do to(删掉) a good job in my subjects. Fortunately, my dreams come true, meanwhile, I ve gained other things--I found（he founded） a solid basic knowledge about my major(加破折号)make me feel easy to contrive the electronic circuit which he to be done during our bachelor years. Thanks to those books!
东方教育点评：
（1）切题。
（2）论证比较有力，表达思想清楚。
（3）文字通顺，连贯性较好，但有个别语言错误。 注： 文中划线部分为原文的一些明显语言错误，括号里的为修改建议，为保持原文面貌，对于结构没有做过多改动。 2003年6月考试四级作文题：An Eye-Witness Account of a Traffic Accident 假设你在某日某时某地目击一起车祸，就此写一份见证书。
见证书须包括以下几点：
1、车祸发生的时间及地点；
2、你所见到的车祸情况；
3、你对车祸原因的分析。 例1． （2分段） At 9:00, Jan. 20, 2003, I eye-witness a traffic accident in Dongfang Street. I see that a（an） old people is hitted (hit)by a car. In my opinion, the rapid driver is the main reason, but the old people also has his error.
东方教育点评：
（1）字数明显不够，尽管都点题了，但只有三句话。
（2）有语法错误。 例2．（5分段） In my opinion, the driver of Benz auto should be blamed on(for) the traffic accident. It was his drunk driving that resulted in this accident. It is not(no) doubt that the traffic accident is a high(hot) topic in the modern(modern) society, different people he different attitude (attitudes) to this.
When it come(comes) to the accident, people think it responsible for the driver. But last Sunday I see(saw) a(an) accident. A woman crossed a street when a car turn(turned at) the crossing .it is too late to stop the car ,The women was bad(badly) hurt. The people who was walking along the street took the woman to hospital, (and) the driver came with them.
As far as （I am） concerned, the both sides he responsibility for this, begin（at the beginning）, the woman shouldnot cross the street. Forthemore, the driver should pay more attention. Last. we should take proper measure .Only (when) we take the measure and we （become） more careful can we he a colorful （life） tomorrow.
东方教育点评：
(1)本文基本切题。
（2）但有的地方表达思想不清楚，层次不够清楚。如第二段把描述车祸情况和发生原因混为一谈，而最后一段的总结又很牵强。
（3）全文有比较多的语言错误，而且有些是严重的错误。 例3．（8分段） At 9:00am October 25st(25th) 2003, I saw a traffic accident on Daxue Road. At that time, I was on my way to school.
When I turned right on the corner, a motorbike knocked into a small car. The motorbike was red, and there are(were) two persons on the motorbike. The car was yellow. The motorbike fell down, and the two persons on the motorbike were slight injured. The (car) driver came out of the car at once, and asked about the two persons. As soon as I saw that, I made a telephone call to 1
10.The traffic police arrived in a short time.
According to what I saw, I thought there may be one reason leading to the accident. That was the motorbike kept too short （a） distant from the car. When the car slowed down, the motorbike couldnt slow down in time. So the accident took place. 东方教育点评：
（1）基本切题。
（2）文字连贯性不强，尤其是第二段，缺少一些必要的衔接词。
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（3）简单句太多，可以考虑把一些合并成复合句。
（4）有些地方人称指代不明（如司机），容易引起误解
（5）有一些基本的时态、语法错误。 例4．（11分段） Last Friday afternoon, when I was on my way home, a traffic accident took place at the crossing of Shanghai Road.
A pupil was knocked down by a black car when he was walking across the street. His legs were badly hurt. Sever(Several) minutes later an ambulance came, and the driver of the black car sent the pupil to the hospital immediately. In my eyes, this accident was due to that the pupil broke the traffic rules. That is to say, the pupil walked across the street when the traffic lights were red. As soon as the driver saw the pupil, he stopped the car, however, it was too late. In my opinion, it was necessary to advocate people to confirm to the traffic rules. If the pupil hadnt broken the traffic rules, the accident might not he happened.
东方教育点评：
(1)本文比较切题，表达思想清楚。
（2）语句比较通顺，但有少量语言错误。 例5．（14分段） My name is Liming. I am studying at college. A week ago I saw a traffic accident , which is still vivid in my mind. It was at about 9:00 on Saturday morning, June 15th, when I went out of the university to visit a friend of mine at another university. I was walking leisurely on the sidewalk when I heard a loud crash of two vehicles just at the T-junction about 10 meters away. Two taxis crashed together. It was a traffic accident.
I went up and found that the two taxis were badly damaged. Both hoofs were out of shape. One door of a car was knocked off and lying on the road. One driver was blooding and another was shut in the taxi. Some people were trying to help the driver get out of the damaged car. One man was calling to the traffic policeman station. A lot of cars were jammed on the road.
From the stopping track on the road, it is clear that the two taxis were driving too fast. But it is just one of the reasons. In my opinion, the taxi drivers are eager to take more passengers and make a little more money. On the other hand, both drivers dont show concern for one another. Both of them wanted to run in front of another. Therefore, the accident is inevitable. So far, we should let the drivers keep it in their mind that a little slower, a little safer. Taking care of others lives means taking care of your own life.
东方教育点评：
（1）切题。
（2）表达清楚，描述详细生动。
（3）文字通顺，连贯性较好。
（4）基本上无大的语言错误，仅有个别小错误。 注： 文中划线部分为原文的一些明显语言错误，括号里的为修改建议，为保持原文面貌，对于结构没有做过多改动。 2003年6月考试六级作文题：Changes of Ownership of Houses in China 图表作文，图表内容是1990，1995，2000的公房和私房变化柱状表，趋势是公房越来越少，私房越来越多。
提纲：
1.简单描述一下图表内容
2.变化原因
3.这个变化对个人和社会的影响 例1． （2分段） 此分段标准为条理不清，思路紊乱，大部分句子均有严重错误。 为了不影响市容，给大家造成负面影响，故此处略去100字…… 例2．（5分段） It is descerned that（删掉）the number of pirate（private） houses had been on a（an） increase from 1990 to 200
0.In 1990, it was about 20 percent; In 1995 it was 40 percent; In 2000, it was 80 percent.
There were some reasons for this fact. One of them was the improvement of peoples living conditions（condition）, all people wanted to own pirate houses. On the other hand, peoples income was on a（an） increase, they could afford to buy pirate houses! Obviously, there were some good things resulted from this fact. Such as it could improve Chinese economy. But there were also some bad things, such as it took much time to go to work!
东方教育点评：
（1）本文基本切题。
（2）字数不够，要酌情扣分。
（2）第一段描述图表不应该单列举出数字，而是应该重点描写变化趋势 ；第二段说明理由不够充分；第三段说明影响有点牵强。
（4）全文语言错误较多。 例3．（8分段） From the graph it is clear that the percentage of the state owned house in china in a city has decreased greatly from 75% in 1990 to 20% in 2000, while the private house has increased sharply. what has caused these changes?
There are, I think, at least two main reasons for these changes. to begin with, with the development of the technology and science, peoples living standard has improved greatly and they can afford to buy high-graded things such as TV, computer and even house. Secondly it is due to the mind people hold and the ecomonic policy. As is known to all, the price of house is often very high, and people must (used to) se their money (for) many years, （however,）as their minds changed, they went to the bank to borrow money and the ecomonic policy also encouraged them to do so. There may be some other reasons, but the above mentiond are commonly acceptable.
To conclude, the ownership of houses reflect the development of our country and people are enjoying a better life, I am firmly sure that the productivity of the society will keep improving and people will enjoy a more affluent life in the near future.
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